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The Fight Over Ninety Mile Beach

  The Fight Over Ninety Mile Beach.

Once long, long ago there lived two gods.  The gods' names were  Tangaroa and Tane. They lived on a beach named Ninety Mile Beach. 

One sunny day Tane went fishing on Tangaroa's side of the beach. Tane got so mad he told Tangaroa´ so all gods started to fight.  Tane got defeated and bruised

 He left.

Tane travelled deep into the forest. He felt happy . He felt he had reached his home. It was cosy and comfortable, much better than  living on the beach.

 So Tane lived in the forest and left the beach to Tangaroa. from then on it was peaceful.